From what i have read in the past few days about Iran and the middle east is that they are very devoted to their religion. They pray five times a day, and their government is based on religion. They are also very war based.
Sean, First of all, this is not a paragraph. It does not appear that you have spent much time gathering thoughts and then organizing them into a cohesive/coherent presentation. You basically have made a list of information. I expect you to be able to write a paragraph at this point on a regular basis, and that you are not is a concern.
Second of all, practice good mechanics. I should not see "i" or capitalization mistakes from a junior in high school!
Sean, First of all, this is not a paragraph. It does not appear that you have spent much time gathering thoughts and then organizing them into a cohesive/coherent presentation. You basically have made a list of information. I expect you to be able to write a paragraph at this point on a regular basis, and that you are not is a concern.
ReplyDeleteSecond of all, practice good mechanics. I should not see "i" or capitalization mistakes from a junior in high school!